hILARIOUS!

YAERGH!

I know this is late but I like this one man! It loops well but I think with work it could turn around into a whole song!

nice!

I like it, it's a sexy beat. I give it an 8 because it has too much squeak. I know that's the whole point of the song, but it gets annoying. Plus i know it would be a great deal to any rapper to have a few measures with out the squeak, so that the rap could take on a different idea, at least momentarily. Also the Oh's. They should really accent certain parts of the song, instead of play the entire time... that's my 2 cents. great job!

sweet

i could never get mellow tracks down right

pretty cool,

but what would make it a 10/10 is if somehow you incorporated Samuel L Jackson. be creative!

no but really, you should add a background. unless ur just goin for a concept piece.